Talk:The Steam Engines of Oz

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	This article was accepted from this draft on 29 November 2018 by reviewer Atlantic306 (talk · contribs).

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" Although the magic prevented Ozians from aging and dying, by the time it began to fade away." REVISION: Although the magic had prevented Ozians from aging and dying, by the time of this story, the magic had begun to fade away. Appletonclack (talk) 16:47, 12 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Agree it's an improvement, go ahead and make the edit, regards Atlantic306 (talk) 21:01, 13 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]