Talk:The Proclamation of Dušan's Law Codex/GA1

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 17:52, 24 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi! Happy to review. Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 17:52, 24 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Impressive work. Here are my comments:

Lead:

As the article is in English, I think it would be more proper to say The Proclamation of Dušan's Law Codex (Serbian: Proglašenje Dušanovog zakonika). Possibly we can do the same for note "a".

Historical background:

most powerful and able rulers I hope the NPOV is not challenged when you say "able". What do the sources say?
Link "Serb" in the first line, not the second.
Can we link or explain "law codex"?

Preparation and composition:

Can you add a word on who Svetozar Gvozdić was, as you do for Milan Kapetanović? This is a redlink.
The Coronation of Tsar Dušan (Krunisanje Cara Dušana) "The Coronation of Tsar Dušan (Serbian: Krunisanje Cara Dušana)"
Dušan's German mercenaries, who line the doors of the church as he exits It should be clear that you are referring to the situation in the painting.
The painting was done en plein air. Would be good to add a word on what the term means here itself, as per [1].

Rest looks good. No copyvio detected, images look fine and are properly licensed. The above points addressed, I would be glad to promote this. Cheers! Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 04:05, 26 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

All done. Thanks for the review! 23 editor (talk) 22:31, 26 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks. I think the article is ready for promotion now. Excellent job! Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 04:19, 27 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]