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GA Review

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Hey, I'll be reviewing this article. Ah, I remember this episode... Anyways, check out Talk:I Married Marge/GA1 for a guideline on how I'll be setting this up. Let's get started! The Flash {talk} 02:14, 25 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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  • "Guest stars in the episode include[...]" -> everybody you mention appear to be all the people who guest star, so you shouldn't say "include."
  • First paragraph is out of place. "Guest stars in the episode[...]" should be moved after "The network's decision to air the episode directly[...]" to fix it.
  • "[...]written by Michael Borkow, and the second[...]" -> "Borkow and the"
    • checkY All done.

Plot summary

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Production

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  • "Shields' said she was asked to appear on the show[...]" -> "when she was asked"
  • "[...]Perry at the time,[11][12][13][14] and an audience[...]" -> "time and and"
    • checkY All done.

Reception

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Images

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  • Both are tagged properly - no complaints here.

Final say

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GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:
    Thanks for getting to all those issues, because I've gone ahead and passed this article! :) The Flash {talk} 02:14, 26 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you very much for the review! :) Theleftorium 08:41, 26 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]