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I am trying to create a fact only encyclopedic entry for wikipedia about "The Nation's Health", a monthly periodical. I am reviewing my content and deleting any information that may seem promotional. Please provide me with feedback for any other material I should exclude, because I feel this entry is valuable and educational.

You have certainly expanded the article since I flagged it. However, it still contains a high degree of puffery (unsourced claims like "the country’s leading source" and "easy-to-understand") as well as material like subscription information which is more in line with an advertisement than with an encyclopedia article. Beyond that, the only source listed for information is the publisher itself, which qualifies as a self-published source; is this publication is truly notable then there should be third-party reliable sources discussing it. --Nat Gertler (talk) 21:49, 9 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]