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Reviewer: Kaleeb18 (talk · contribs) 02:22, 6 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]


I'll be picking up this article. ― Kaleeb18TalkCaleb 02:22, 6 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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1. Well-written:
1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct.
  • After one independent album, the band was signed by MCA Nashville Records and David Lee Holt replaced – Comma after Records
  • and third overall, 1994's What a Crying Shame – comma not needed
  • Big Machine Records' Valory imprint and then on Mono Mundo; Reynolds was fired in 2014 and while he was not officially replaced, – The semi colon part of the sentence does not seem to go together withe the earlier part of the sentence so I would just remove the semicolon and replace it with a period
  • successful album, What a Crying Shame, has – commas not needed
  • and Johnny Cash, and thus decided to – replace and thus with they
  • Completing the original lineup were drummer Paul Deakin, a friend of Reynolds's and native of Ohio. Completing the original lineup was lead – these two sentences start exactly the same. so which completed the lineup
  • the band was then invited to perform for a showcase – remove then
  • He co-produced with guitarists Richard Bennett and Steve Fishell, – add it before with
  • Holt also quit the band after only one album – remove also
  • Jerry Dale McFadden began accompanying the band in concert – isn't concert supposed to be plural
  • Mark Deming of AllMusic thought that Cook's production – AllMusic needs to be italicized
  • covered the 1934 Richard Rodgers and Lorenz Hart standard "Blue Moon"Hart needs to be possessive
  • "Blue Moon" for the soundtrack of the soundtrack of the film Apollo 13 – remove of the soundtrack
  • MCA released the band's next album, Music for All Occasions – commas not needed
  • This album was led off by the single "Here Comes the Rain" – change this to the
  • "Here Comes the Rain", and with former NRBQ member Al Anderson – pretty sure comma not needed
  • Mark Deming of AllMusic wrote that itAllMusic needs to be italicized
  • Joel Bernstein of Country Standard Time noted that the band – italicize Country Standard Time
  • At the 38th Grammy Awards in February 1996: Music for All Occasions – shouldn't the colon be a comma
  • this song would also receive a Grammy Award nomination for Best Country Performance – change ths to the
  • In May 1997 Malo also previewed new songs at live sessions – comma after 1997
  • release of their next studio album, Trampoline – comma not needed
  • John D. Buchanan of AllMusic wrote that "Easily the group's most musically – italicize AllMusic
  • The Mavericks departed MCA Nashville in 1999; – add with after departed
  • Deakin told the website Country Standard Time in 2000 – italicize Country Standard Time
  • live album recorded in Austin, Texas which was accompanied by a DVD release – comma after Texas
  • Jeffrey B. Remz of Country Standard Time reviewed the album favorably – italicize Country Standard Time
  • titled Suited Up and Ready, and charted in early 2012 – no comma needed
  • Their first full-length album for Valory, In Time, was – no commas needed
  • Writing for AllMusic, Steve Leggett stated that it – italicize AllMusic
  • This revelation was not made public until December – change this to the
  • second Valory album, Mono, on February 7, 2015 – commas aroun Mono are not needed
  • Mark Smotroff of Audiophile Review noted – italicize AllMusic
  • Country Standard Time reviewer Andy Turner stated that the album – italicize Country Standard Time
  • the band founded their own label, Mono Mundo, in association – no commas needed
  • Christmas album, Hey! Merry Christmas! – no comma needed
  • Deming stated in AllMusic that while the album – italicize AllMusic
  • Writing for AllMusic, John D. Buchanan described What a Crying Shame – italicize AllMusic
  • John D. Buchanan of AllMusic said of the band that "Fusing – italicize AllMusic
  • He also found influences of two-step in that album's – replace that with the
  • while Joel Bernstein of Country Standard Time compared the latter – italicize Country Standard Time
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  • What makes Weeklywire.com, MusicRow, The Daily Country, Audiophile, and tejanonation reliable
2c. it contains no original research.
  • spotchecks for refs 6, 9, 18, 26, 43, 48, 63, 71, and 73 are all good but nothing seems to appear for ref 34
2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism.
  • the copyvio detector recorded a 44.1% violation possibility, but the stuff was put in quotes and other things like the album's names were considered a violation, which are not
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@Kaleeb18: Addressing your concerns here.

  • I think I got all of the 1a points. The only one I'm contesting is italicizing AllMusic and Country Standard Time. I couldn't find anything within our own manuals of style saying whether or not website names are italicized, but most offsite manuals of style agree on not italicizing website names. If you can find something saying they should be, let me know.

Think I've got everything. Ten Pound Hammer(What did I screw up now?) 02:43, 7 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

All looks good and you seem to be correct I did not know that. The only thing I'm still seeeing is what makes Tejanonation reliable ― Kaleeb18TalkCaleb 12:53, 7 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
My bad, I missed that one. Couldn't find anything better so I removed it. Ten Pound Hammer(What did I screw up now?) 15:46, 7 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Congrats on the GA ― Kaleeb18TalkCaleb 16:36, 7 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]