Talk:The Last Voyage of the Starship Enterprise/GA1
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Reviewer: Maile66 (talk · contribs) 21:57, 21 October 2015 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it reasonably well written?
- A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:
- Comment - GA is not dependent upon this, but under the Themes section, there is repetitiveness in wording: Mother Jones
the Enterprise was defeated not by its traditional enemies such as the Klingons but by a stupid NBC executive
and Jon Coreynot Khan Noonien Singh or the Klingons that defeated the Enterprise but an enemy much more powerful — the NBC executives
appearing one paragraph after the other as it does. Might want to reword one or the other. - AGF on offline sourcing. I also ran Earwig, which showed no issues of concern, except for the place where it compared the article with itself as a copy.
- Comment - GA is not dependent upon this, but under the Themes section, there is repetitiveness in wording: Mother Jones
- B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
- A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. Has an appropriate reference section:
- B. Cites reliable sources, where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- A. Has an appropriate reference section:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused (see summary style):
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- In fact, this article survived AFD on 7 October 2015, and on 8 October Cirt began a major improvement of the article. Cirt has been the primary editor since then.
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- The image of John Belushi as Kirk is Fair Use. All others are licensed on Commons.
- B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- Good work. — Maile (talk) 22:18, 21 October 2015 (UTC)
- Pass or Fail:
- Thanks very much, Maile66, most appreciated ! — Cirt (talk) 04:11, 22 October 2015 (UTC)