Talk:The Incentive/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 17:31, 3 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox: Use {{start date}} in templates for dates
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:55, 8 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Infobox: No guest stars?
Unfortunately, no one big enough.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:55, 8 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Infobox: Link The Office?
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:55, 8 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Lede: Unlink television series per WP:OVERLINK
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:55, 8 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Lede: Same goes for showrunner
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:55, 8 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Lede: NBC → the National Broadcasting Company (NBC), as per MOS:ACRO
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:55, 8 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Plot: Direct quotes need actual references
I think I fixed this.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:55, 8 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Production: "The official website for The Office" don't think that is important to subject. Perhaps remove.
I kept it, as its in all the other articles. If I removed it, it would make no sense, and readers would question whether they were leaked or officially released.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:55, 8 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Cultural references: Seems small. Expand, or merge with production
It's a paragraph-sized section, and production and cultural references are two different things.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:55, 8 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Reception: "%" → "percent"
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:55, 8 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Reviews: Seems quotey. Consider paraphrasing, etc.
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:55, 8 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]
I did a little copy-edit, please check it, which had some typos
Looks good.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:55, 8 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]
That's all, on hold for now. Good work.
TBran dl ey 03:42, 8 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Think I got everything. Thank you!--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:55, 8 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Yep. Article looks good now. Passing. Well done! TBran dl ey 03:59, 8 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]