Talk:The Immaculate Collection (video)/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Unexpectedlydian (talk · contribs) 19:01, 2 March 2024 (UTC)

Hello! I will be reviewing this article as part of the March 2024 GAN backlog drive. Comments will follow shortly in the table below. Unexpectedlydian^♯4talk^‽ 19:01, 2 March 2024 (UTC)

@11JORN I've completed the initial review. Thanks for all your work on this article, only a few changes needed to get it to GA. Let me know if you have any questions! Unexpectedlydian^♯4talk^‽ 21:58, 2 March 2024 (UTC)

@11JORN Hello! Hope you're well. Just checking if you're able to complete the suggested changes? Unexpectedlydian^♯4talk^‽ 15:12, 15 March 2024 (UTC)

@Dcdiehardfan: adressed two comments, as did I; I believe that's everything! Averageuntitleduser (talk) 23:26, 21 March 2024 (UTC)

Hi @Dcdiehardfan and @Averageuntitleduser, thanks for being bold and addressing the comments! Happy to pass the review now. Congrats to @11JORN as well for nominating a great article. Unexpectedlydian^♯4talk^‽ 20:14, 23 March 2024 (UTC)

Rate	Attribute	Review Comment
1. Well-written:
	1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct.	Lead Y Background and release Y Reception I'm not too sure about the use of the word "eventually" a few times in this section - it may imply that the charting and certification was overdue. I'd suggest rewording. Track listing Y Credits and personnel Y Charts Y Certifications and sales Y
	1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation.	Lead sections Y Layout Y Words to watch See section 1a about use of the word "eventually". Fiction N/A List incorporation Y
2. Verifiable with no original research:
	2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline.	Citations and references are located in the appropriate places.
	2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose).	Source spot-check Rooksby, Rikky (2004). Two new songs, "Justify My Love" and "Rescue Me", were included on the album in order to generate public interest, and were later released as singles from the project. I cannot find the info on either of these pages to suggest that the two songs were newly-released or that they were later released at singles - can you help me here? I've adjusted the page numbers and, for their later release as singles, added a Billboard source. For the "newly-released" part, the book says: Of course, plenty of people already owned these tracks so to entice them to invest in this collection whoever put it together adopted the old trick of spicing it up with two new songs. they go on to describe "Justify My Love" and "Rescue Me" Averageuntitleduser (talk) 23:26, 21 March 2024 (UTC) Madonna (1990). 7599-38195-2. Are we able to access the liner notes from the URL provided? (Ref number 36). I could not find it, so I went ahead and removed the URL. Averageuntitleduser (talk) 23:26, 21 March 2024 (UTC) Willman, Chris (November 25, 1990). Y Top Video Sales Top Music Videos January 19, 1991. Eventually, the video compilation reached the number one in the Top Music Videos. Can you change this to say that it reached the number one in January 1991? American video certifications – Madonna – The Immaculate Collection". Recording Industry Association of America. Y Top 15 Music Video" (PDF). Music Week. Y Grein, Paul (September 2, 2010). The info comes from a comment on the article, but since it is by the author of the article I think that is just about ok. White, Chris (January 26, 1991). Y "Finally. A greatest hits album that lives up to its name" (PDF). Billboard. Y Bego, Mark (2000). Y
	2c. it contains no original research.	I am content from source checks that there has been no OR.
	2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism.	Copyvio detector brings up nothing of concern. Content from spot-checks that there has been no plagiarism.
3. Broad in its coverage:
	3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic.	I am content that the article addresses that main aspects of the topic.
	3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).	The article does not go into unnecessary detail. There is appropriate discussion of the accompanying audio album.
	4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.	Article content is presented neutrally.
	5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.	No evidence of instability or edit warring. Majority of recent edits are by nominator.
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
	6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content.	Valid fair use rationale is provided for album cover art.
	6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions.	No caption is provided, unless there have been multiple covers - is the image in the article the only cover? Looks like this was the only cover image.
	7. Overall assessment.

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