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Reviewer: Xtzou (Talk) 22:05, 8 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, I only have a few comments, as the article is generally fine. You probably noticed that I did some minor copy editing which you are free to override.

  • How did they duel? A fist fight, or what? (At first I assumed it was with swords.)
  • "During the scene when Andy returns to the office and confronts his co-workers amid long standing silence," - how is silence long standing in this situation?
    • I'm not sure I understand your comment. It's a scene where he goes in and there's a long awkward silence for a long time. I changed the language a bit here too... — Hunter Kahn 23:48, 8 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The Dwight bobblehead doll is a reference to the second season episode "Valentine's Day", in which Angela gave it to Dwight as a gift." - How is a reference to a previous episode a "cultural reference"?
    • I guess it's more self-referential, but other television episodes have included these kind of references. If you don't think it works, feel free to delete it. — Hunter Kahn 23:48, 8 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Xtzou (Talk) 22:05, 8 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality: Good
    B. MoS compliance: Complies with MoS
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources: Reliable sources
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary: Yes
    C. No original research:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    B. Focused:
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail: Pass!