Talk:The Duel (The Office)/GA1
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Reviewer: Xtzou (Talk) 22:05, 8 May 2010 (UTC)
Hi, I only have a few comments, as the article is generally fine. You probably noticed that I did some minor copy editing which you are free to override.
- How did they duel? A fist fight, or what? (At first I assumed it was with swords.)
- Only a physical fight. I added some language to make that more clear. — Hunter Kahn 23:48, 8 May 2010 (UTC)
- "During the scene when Andy returns to the office and confronts his co-workers amid long standing silence," - how is silence long standing in this situation?
- I'm not sure I understand your comment. It's a scene where he goes in and there's a long awkward silence for a long time. I changed the language a bit here too... — Hunter Kahn 23:48, 8 May 2010 (UTC)
- "The Dwight bobblehead doll is a reference to the second season episode "Valentine's Day", in which Angela gave it to Dwight as a gift." - How is a reference to a previous episode a "cultural reference"?
- I guess it's more self-referential, but other television episodes have included these kind of references. If you don't think it works, feel free to delete it. — Hunter Kahn 23:48, 8 May 2010 (UTC)
Xtzou (Talk) 22:05, 8 May 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review! — Hunter Kahn 23:48, 8 May 2010 (UTC)
- Reply. What about "a long, awkward silence"? The rest, "for a long time" is redundant. That would make sense to me: "a long, awkward silence". Xtzou (Talk) 00:21, 9 May 2010 (UTC)
- Looks fine. — Hunter Kahn 00:59, 9 May 2010 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it reasonably well written?
- A. Prose quality:
Good
- B. MoS compliance:
Complies with MoS
- A. Prose quality:
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
Reliable sources
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
Yes
- C. No original research:
- A. References to sources:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail: Pass!
- Pass or Fail: Pass!
- Congratulations! Xtzou (Talk) 16:34, 9 May 2010 (UTC)