Talk:The David Pakman Show
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Paternity leave
[edit]Are you insinuating that Pakman's husband gave birth to a child? I believe some clarification is in order here. --73.236.177.244 (talk) 20:31, 13 September 2022 (UTC)
Article clean up
[edit]I've been going through the page and cleaning it up a bit. The article still has a number of areas that have insufficient sourcing, self-sourcing, or do not have sufficient sourcing to indicate notability (and thus why it should be included in the article at all). I think the next areas to focus on are the show's history (has a number of entries which probably shouldn't be included) and all the appearances (in the "Content" section, may need condensing or trimming if non-notable). aismallard (talk) 19:38, 11 April 2022 (UTC)
I've cleaned up a lot of the content section, removing primary sources and appearances which do not appear to be backed by any RS. A couple subsections within it still need pruning, but it should be in a much better state. The next two portions which need more work would be the opening and the history section, which are currently very long and not well-sourced. aismallard (talk) 03:24, 2 November 2022 (UTC)