Talk:The Church on Ruby Road/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: TheDoctorWho (talk · contribs) 05:55, 5 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: OlifanofmrTennant (talk · contribs) 07:54, 13 December 2024 (UTC) I'll take this up per my own comments. Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 07:54, 13 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Is it well written?
A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:

B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:
Is it verifiable with no original research, as shown by a source spot-check?
A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:

B. Reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):

C. It contains no original research:

D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:
Is it broad in its coverage?
A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:

B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):
Is it neutral?
It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
Is it stable?
It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:

B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
Overall:
Pass or Fail:

Lead

"after which the show transitioned to New Year's specials" could be read as after The Church on Ruby Road the show transitioned to New Years needs clarification.

Done

Plot

Plot summary is 7 words over the limit.

Done

Production

For the announcement of the title, instead of CultBox maybe cite the press release?

Done (cited the tweet that CultBox used instead)

"Scenes at the church were filmed on 14 and 15 January at St Mary's Church in Nash, Newport." consider introuducing the name of the Church first.

Done

Broadcast and reception

Needs to be updated as Rotten Tomatoes now has 28 reviews.

Done

Very end of Critical Reception flooded with unreliable reviews (with the exception of Den of Geek) remove those

Done

Clean up the Den of Geek review

Done

Maybe less quotes?

Done (trimmed some of the longer quotes/sentences)

Home media

""The Church on Ruby Road" was released individually on home media on 12 February 2024." unclear as to what format. DVD? Blu-ray? Both? Laserdisc?

Done

State who reads the audio book.

Done

Refs

Whether websites are linked is inconsistent.

Done

Whether the website "Doctorwho.tv" is listed as "Doctor Who" or "Doctor Who TV" is inconsistent.

Done (Changed them all to Doctor Who TV)

Ref 13, missing website. Lewis Knight doesn't seem to be listed as a writer.

Done (Assuming this was meant for ref 14 at the time?)

Ref 28, change website to BBC News for consistency with other citations.

Done (It's actually BBC Media Centre, but I still updated it to that)

Ref 29, change to The Daily Telegraph for consistency

Done

Spot checked odd numbered refs and everything lined up.

Misc.

No major copyright concerns, only major overlap is quotes.

No recent edit wars.

Two commons and one free use with a sufficient explanation.

Everything needs alt text.

That's all I got ping when ready or if you have further questions. Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 08:30, 13 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@OlifanofmrTennant: I believe I've addressed everything you've left here. TheDoctorWho (talk) 19:31, 14 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

All's good well done. Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 19:53, 14 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]