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Reviewer: Dr. Blofeld (talk · contribs) 12:12, 31 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]


Give me a few days on this.♦ Dr. Blofeld 12:12, 31 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Lede
  • "The book was considered " -by whom?
Reference provided in the "Critical Analysis" section. — Ssven2 Speak 2 me 08:24, 2 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • Marlinspike Hall -where is this, Belgium, England, Italy?
Technically in Belgium according to the book. I'll add a bit of information on it in the background section. — Ssven2 Speak 2 me 08:24, 2 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]
@Dr. Blofeld:  Done. — Ssven2 Speak 2 me 08:42, 2 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Plot
  • "Tintin and Captain Haddock are walking through the countryside" -again, is this Belgian or English countryside?
As per the English version, it's the fictional English countryside of Marlinshire (i.e. like Hampshire, Worcestershire, Yorkshire etc.) — Ssven2 Speak 2 me 08:27, 2 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]
History
  • Tintin in Tibet, The Black Island, Tintin and the Picaros, The Adventures of Jo, Zette and Jocko. -Add years in brackets?
 Done Added. — Ssven2 Speak 2 me 08:27, 2 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • Per MOS avoid linking countries like Germany and United States
 Done Removed links. — Ssven2 Speak 2 me 08:27, 2 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Critical
  • Who are Jean-Marc Lofficier, Randy Lofficier and Harry Thompson?
Wrote about it in the Critical analysis section. — Ssven2 Speak 2 me 08:31, 2 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]


GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:
    B. MoS compliance:
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
    C. No original research:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    B. Focused:
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:

Excellent job, little to complain about for GA, Fram will appreciate the effort.♦ Dr. Blofeld 08:37, 2 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@Dr. Blofeld: Thanks, Doc. My first Tintin GA! Yay! The credit also goes to Midnightblueowl (without whose initiative with Tintin articles I might have found the going difficult with this one.) and Prhartcom (For his deeply useful inputs and edits.) Ssven2 Speak 2 me 08:43, 2 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]