Talk:The Carpet/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 23:03, 4 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

In the infobox, "The Office" should be in italics
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 00:52, 22 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Where are production codes and running times referenced?
Added.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 00:52, 22 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Unlink television series per WP:OVERLINK
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 00:52, 22 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"twentieth" should be "20th", as per WP:MOSNUM
I can't find this anywhere in MOSNUM. As long as I'm consistent, it shouldn't be a big deal.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 00:52, 22 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"In this episode, In this episode," hum...
Fixed.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 00:52, 22 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"a disgusting" I don't think that represents a neutral point of view, as a requirement of the GA criteria. Could that be changed, as in your opinion, it is "disgusting"
I don't think this is non-NPOV. Someone crapped in his office, which is universally considered disgusting.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 00:52, 22 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"first and only" shouldn't episode be added after that
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 00:52, 22 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"In its" in should be upon
Fixed.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 00:52, 22 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"For a time," well, when then?
Reworded.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 00:52, 22 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Are there any images of people related, perhaps?
Added a picture of Paul Lieberstein.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 00:52, 22 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Unlink American per WP:OVERLINK in cultural references
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 00:52, 22 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"an American reality television" actually, unlink reality television there, as its first link is above, also in cultural references, thus a WP:OVERLINK violation
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 00:52, 22 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"NBC" should be written out fully as "the National Broadcasting Company (NBC)" on first mention, per MOS:ACRO
It's mentioned in the intro, and that should be enough (and that's been fine and good for all other Office GAs).--Gen. Quon (Talk) 00:52, 22 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Link Television Without Pity per WP:UNDERLINK
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 00:52, 22 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"The episode was viewed by 8.6 million viewers.[9] The episode", that changed be changed to something else, the second part, two of "the episode"'s sentence before sentence doesn't seem right
Reworded.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 00:52, 22 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"Furthermore, the episode was particularly popular with fans of the series, particularly college students" reference?
It's Ref. 13. I bundled the references.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 00:52, 22 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Double quotes (") should be single quotes (') in reference titles in this article, as per WP:MOS
I believe it's all better now.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 00:52, 22 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Link NBC in all reference titles
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 00:52, 22 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Link NBC.com in external links
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 00:52, 22 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Categories should be sorted in alphabetical order
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 00:52, 22 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Overall; good work. On hold for now. TBr and ley 23:32, 21 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I have fixed or responded to all the issues. Thank you!--Gen. Quon (Talk) 00:52, 22 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Passing. TBr and ley 01:00, 22 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]