Talk:The Boat Race 1994/GA1
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Reviewer: Seattle (talk · contribs) 23:59, 5 August 2014 (UTC)
I'll review this soon. Seattle (talk) 23:59, 5 August 2014 (UTC)
- Comments:
- DAB
- Yep. Acknowledged, but the HotR I'm linking doesn't feature as one of the other links, so that's the best we have. The Rambling Man (talk) 17:56, 6 August 2014 (UTC)
- Meanwhile, Oxford lost out to London Rowing Club's lightweight crew, narrowly defeated the University of London Boat Club. Is that missing a "by" after "narrowly", or is it properly constructed as is?
- added "but" (which wasn't either of your choices, but re-checking the source, that was what was intended...) The Rambling Man (talk) 17:56, 6 August 2014 (UTC)
- Fred Smallbone was installed as finishing coach can you link "finishing coach" anywhere?
- Have attempted to link to the glossary. The Rambling Man (talk) 17:56, 6 August 2014 (UTC)
That's all I can see. Seattle (talk) 17:22, 6 August 2014 (UTC)
- As always, thanks so much. The Rambling Man (talk) 17:56, 6 August 2014 (UTC)