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"it sold 15.000 copies," → "the album sold 15,000 copies," but these copies for the certification are not sourced nor is the organization, so back up by adding a ref directly from them instead - Done
Retitle to Reception and recordings, merging with the following section - Done
For correct order, the critical reception para should be the one before commercial reception - Done
A lot of the first para is not backed up by the sources - Done (I think)
"at the Spaladium Arena in her native Split." → "at the Spaladium Arena in Split." - Done
Remove the music critics part from this para since that is to do with critical reception - Done
"proved to be commercially successful among the audience of 5.000 people." what exactly does this mean? Also, add a comma for 5,000. - Done, it meant the concert sold out to 15.000 people
"of 12.000 people." → "of 12,000 people." - Done
"front of 10.000 people." → "front of 10,000 people." - Done
Remove the portal introduction to Index.hr - Done
The amazed quote allegedly from many reporters is not sourced - Done
"was filled with"fun" → "was filled with "fun" - Done
"with her songs and sincere emotions, and with it she sang every song and every verse in her breath" is sourced as the quote instead of the one beginning "with songs and honest emotions", so alter appropriately - Done
"observed that the highlights of" → "observed the highlights of" - Done
Cite Story.hr as publisher instead on refs 3 and 12 - Done
What exactly makes refs 4 and 9 reliable sources? - If you are referring to T-portal and RTL.hr - the former one is an official newspaper's website and the latter is a TV channel, so both are trustworthy.
Cite Index.hr as publisher instead on refs 11 and 14, only wikilinking on the first instance - Done
Cite Story.hr as publisher instead on ref 12 - Done
Thank you very much for this thorough and careful review. I have tried to address most of the issues you have raised, I need clarifications for some and for others, I really cannot find sources or supporting information. I will still try to make some small fixes later today. Abnormalcy333 (talk) 11:09, 20 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Abnormalcy333 Thank you for getting back to me on this and regarding the points you don't understand, the quote I mentioned beginning with "with her songs and" should be the text quoted in speech marks instead since it is what the source says and the set list needs to be sourced; if you can only find a ref for one concert then simply add a heading saying "This set list is representative of the tour's concert at..." I hope you fix all of these soon! --K. Peake09:32, 21 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Kyle Peake: I think everything is fixed except for the sourcing part. I think it is practically impossible to do so for the tour's set list and maybe I will have to combine numerous to support the dates of the stops. Abnormalcy333 (talk) 05:54, 22 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Abnormalcy333 No, what I meant is that how it is presented right now saying that set list is representative of a specific concert is fully acceptable, however you need at least one source backing up the set list for that concert because otherwise this is original research. I am not saying to source the set list for every single concert, just make sure at least one is used to source. --K. Peake06:44, 22 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Kyle Peake: Yes, I understand; my point was that it is difficult to find such a source. What I saw being done on the Croatian Wikipedia from where I translated the original article is that they used a YouTube link to the concert in question but the video was removed by the uploader. Otherwise, I think it is practically impossible to find a source. With the multiple source suggestion, I was referring to the list of 7 concerts that were a part of the tour. Abnormalcy333 (talk) 07:00, 22 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]