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Reviewer: Ruby2010 comment! 20:52, 26 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

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More to come Ruby2010 comment! 21:20, 26 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • Wikilink Rainier Wolfcastle in lead
  • You can remove Canada in the lead (I think most readers know where Toronto is; wikilink the city for those less informed) ;)
  • Wikilink characters in polt (Homer etc)
  • The plot seems a little disconnected (why did Homer steal the Olympic torch?) The section could use some expansion (it's still below the basic word limits)
  • "even though it Canada is not mentioned"
  • "features the Simpsons first travel to Canada" -> the Simpsons'
  • "It was written by Frink and, according to Selman, the line became very popular with the staff..." I think you should change the first "It" to "the line" and change second "the line" to "it"
  • Make sure sentences with quotes end with citations
  • Refs 2 and 10: page number?
  • Remove caps on ref 8

On hold for seven days. Thanks, Ruby2010 comment! 21:53, 26 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review! Queenieacoustic (talk) 10:28, 29 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Looks good except: Refs 2 and 10: page number? Ruby2010 comment! 16:25, 30 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]
The refs were added by another editor. I've asked him if he could provide with the page numbers, but he hasn't responded yet, so there's really nothing I can do for now unfortunately. Queenieacoustic (talk) 21:50, 2 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
User:Scorpion0422 likely didn't include the page numbers because they weren't available. Page numbers are not always available on Newsbank. And besides, page numbers are optional per Wikipedia:Citing sources. Theleftorium (talk) 23:00, 2 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Well, I'm satisfied then. Pass for GA. Nice work, Ruby2010 comment! 03:06, 3 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
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