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May 4, 2011	Good article nominee	Listed

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Centralized move discussion

Per WP:LOST/Episode guidelines, this page should be moved from The 23rd Psalm to The 23rd Psalm (Lost), to make it consistent with the other Lost episodes at Category:Lost episodes. Anyone interested in supporting or opposing this move, or who believes that a different suffix should be used (such as "(Lost episode)"), or who wishes to comment in any way, is encouraged to participate at Wikipedia_talk:WikiProject Lost/Episode guidelines#Name suffix. --Elonka 14:15, 29 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Notability

By the fact that this episode was nominated for an Emmy Award, that pretty clearly makes it notable. --El on ka 23:01, 13 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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Reviewer: Ruby2010 comment! 00:32, 2 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I will review soon one of my favorite Lost episodes. Ruby2010 comment! 00:32, 2 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Comments

One dab link needs fixing Y
The lead has a few minor problems; I fixed them here
The episode has an overall theme of redemption, and was written in a way it paralleled "Deus Ex Machina", the episode where the Nigerian airplane was first introduced. Not sure what you're trying to say here. The episode paralleled "Deus Ex Machina"? Make it more clear please
Find the proper wikilink for redemption
Italicize Entertainment Weekly (it's a magazine) Y

Just a few minor fixes needed above, and the article will be good to go. I'll place the review on hold for seven days. Thanks, Ruby2010 comment! 00:49, 2 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Loks good. Pass for GA. Thanks, Ruby2010 comment! 20:22, 4 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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