Talk:Thaipusam/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Magentic Manifestations (talk · contribs) 03:45, 27 April 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Vestrian24Bio (talk · contribs) 12:52, 2 July 2024 (UTC)

@ Vestrian24Bio Thanks for taking it up. Will address the comments shortly.Magentic Manifestations (talk) 13:06, 2 July 2024 (UTC)

Progress

Hi! I'll be reviewing this article, current progress is shown in the below section; with additional comments afterwards it. Vestrian24Bio (TALK) 12:52, 2 July 2024 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Comments

1a: I found the following sentences in need to be given a rewriting.

• The 3rd paragraph of the lead should be amended the following way:

  [[Tamil people|Tamils]] should direectly link to Tamils instead.Y

  South East Asia should be Southeast Asia.Y

  Fiji, Mauritius, South Africa and Canada, Caribbean countries including Trinidad and Tobago, Guyana and Suriname should be Fiji, Mauritius, South Africa, Canada and Caribbean countries including Trinidad and Tobago, Guyana and Suriname.Y

• Same changes should be made on the first paragraph of Outside India section as well.Y

1b: The sidebar {{Kaumaram}} should come after the infobox per MOS:ORDER.Y

2a: All good.

2b:

• First paragraphs of Practices section and Outside India section needs more citations.In the first section, Have added, re-arranged and re-organized the citation part to be clearer. Would help if you could specify exactly what is not referenced here. In the second section, gave citations against each and removed uncited countries. Y

2c: All good.

3, 4, 5, 6: All good. Vestrian24Bio (TALK) 12:52, 2 July 2024 (UTC)

@Vestrian24Bio, comments have been addressed. Thanks! Magentic Manifestations (talk) 14:01, 2 July 2024 (UTC)

All good; I'll finish the review now. Vestrian24Bio (TALK) 14:10, 2 July 2024 (UTC)