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GA Review

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Reviewer: Claritas § 19:47, 30 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS):
    The only issues here is the statement that "She was not really called Queen by Appian", which is both too casual and unclear, and some comma/punctuation issues which can be sorted out by a quick copy/edit. Put citations after punctuation, not before.
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
    No issues here, I think it is very well sourced.
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
    I think it's generally good, but I think some more biographical detail might be required - are approximate dates of birth/death recorded ? What happened to Illyria after her rule was "dismembered" ? It didn't become a Roman Province until 165 B.C.E. Who succeeded her ?
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
    No issues here.
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
    This is picky, but I think you might want a more explanatory caption for the map of the Illryian wars - "A map showing...." maybe ?
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:
    I'm going to put this on hold pending improvements to the article. Good work so far ! Claritas § 19:47, 30 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]