Talk:Telemachy

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quality is lacking

This article reads like a bad undergraduate essay. I think the topic is valid for Wikipedia, and this could be a valuable article when improved, but at the moment it's not helping anyone. I hope to return and improve it once I've gotten through some of the other articles I want to work on... --Akhilleus (talk) 06:27, 17 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I took a stab at improvement.

Broke down the events of Books 1-4, highlighting the elements that contribute to Telemachus' transition from boyhood to manhood. Added a little postscript about Athena as mentor.Ifnkovhg 22:22, 15 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]

P.S. I can't see how this article by itself will be anything but a stub. Should it be absorbed into the "Telemachus" article?Ifnkovhg 22:40, 15 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]