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GA Review

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Reviewer: Sportsfan77777 (talk · contribs) 02:59, 25 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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  • in Colombia and the United States ===>>> in either Colombia or the United States (to clarify that she is not the first to win both, but the first in Colombia, and also the first in the US)
  • the test driver <<<=== Just confirming, is she the only test driver on the team?
  • Is it normal to leave out the driver's height in the infobox?
  • Is there a specific type of car or race that she does most often? Or has she participated in so many different types of auto races that it's not worth trying to generalize or mention? Based on all of the different racing series she has been in, I wouldn't be surprised if it was the latter.

Early life

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Karting

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2009

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  • one class victory, ten category podium finishes and accrued ===>>> one class victory and ten category podium finishes, accruing (Also, should "class victory" be "race victory"? And is a "category podium" different from a "podium"?)
  • Calderón entered the final three weekends <<<=== Start a new sentence (unless it's directly related to Soucek?)
  • She had tyre issues during her European Series campaign, and Double R Racing's inexperience competing in the championship meant she scored no points in the season. ===>>> Maybe something like "She scored no points during her European Series campaign, in part because..." (I don't feel like either of the first two necessarily imply she wouldn't be able to score points?)
  • Circuit de Catalunya but was illegible ===>>> Circuit de Catalunya but was ineligible

2015

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2019

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Driving style

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Racing record

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  • Okay.

Overall

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  • Well-sourced.
  • No dab links.
  • Can you add short descriptions to the date sub-section headers under racing career to highlight key points (e.g. races, teams, or accomplishments)?
  • It's hard to follow all of the different series, but at the same time, I don't think there is a way to fix that.

Very solid! Placing on hold. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 11:37, 25 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]


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