Talk:Taro Tsujimoto/GA1
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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 01:47, 18 August 2023 (UTC)
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[edit]- What a fun article! I will review it shortly. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 01:47, 18 August 2023 (UTC)
- Hey Famous Hobo, sorry for the delay! While this is a well written and in-depth article, I am concerned with some of your video references. Per Wikipedia:Video links:
Linking to online videos can be acceptable if it is demonstrated that the content was posted by the copyright holder or with their permission
. I highly doubt John Boutet got permission from TSN to upload this video onto YouTube. If this video gets copyright stuck and taken down, this article loses much of its sourcing material. If you can find references to make up for the video content, I think this is an easy pass. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 03:08, 29 August 2023 (UTC)
- HickoryOughtShirt?4 So I was able to remove all of the TSN reference instances. Just about everything was covered in the WGRZ video (albeit with less "pizazz"). The only statement that I couldn't find anywhere else was about how Imlach said Tsujimoto trained in the Himalayas. As much as I would have loved to include that bit of random trivia, it's not necessary to the article, so I cut it. Famous Hobo (talk) 05:16, 29 August 2023 (UTC)
- Ya, sorry about that Famous Hobo. I know it's annoying to lose interesting content. Have you thought about trying to gain access to Newspaper Archive through the Wikipedia Library? I have found it immensely helpful with older article subjects. Anyways, I am passing this article! HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 16:31, 29 August 2023 (UTC)
- HickoryOughtShirt?4 So I was able to remove all of the TSN reference instances. Just about everything was covered in the WGRZ video (albeit with less "pizazz"). The only statement that I couldn't find anywhere else was about how Imlach said Tsujimoto trained in the Himalayas. As much as I would have loved to include that bit of random trivia, it's not necessary to the article, so I cut it. Famous Hobo (talk) 05:16, 29 August 2023 (UTC)