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Talk:T19 Howitzer Motor Carriage/GA1

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 15:14, 30 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]


I'll start this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:14, 30 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]

  • No DABs, external links OK.
  • Images appropriately licensed.
  • Rephrase the first sentence of the lede; something like "the T19 was a 105 mm howitzer mounted on a half-track chassis during WW2 by the US Army", and adjust the following sentence as necessary. Your current phrasing is ambiguous. Done
  • You're cramming a awful lot of information into the specifications section. It's hard to read because it's so dense, so break it into shorter sentences. And break it into two paragraphs, one for the vehicle and the other for the crew and armament details. Done
  • How is it similar to an M3? If they used the same chassis and other components, say so. Done
  • Provide metric conversions for all measurements on first use. Done
  • How much ammo did it carry? For both weapons, please. Done
  • Who designed it, Diamond T or the Ordnance Branch? Done
  • Add a link to gun shield. Done
  • When exactly was it accepted?
  • Surprising, but OK.