Talk:Susanne Antonetta

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shirulashem (talk) 17:21, 26 December 2008 (UTC) Sorry I have a question, where did you get the information she is Italian? Could you kindly post that info, thanks — Preceding unsigned comment added by 162.229.238.0 (talk) 15:55, 4 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

This line definitely needs a citation; otherwise, it sound extremely biased: "Ironically, the latter condition was treated with psychotropic drugs, some of which are derived from the very same dye chemicals dumped, sometimes recklessly, into the environment of southern New Jersey."