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GA Review

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Reviewer: DragonZero (Talk · Contribs) 09:44, 10 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:
    B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
    C. No original research:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    B. Focused:
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:
    Passed after issues addressed


Comments by DragonZero (Talk · Contribs)
  • Reference 1: Publisher Amazon, Work Boxofficemojo. Mistake
Fixed mistake. Darth Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 20:35, 10 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Reference 3: Dead
Replaced with the PDF link. Darth Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 20:35, 10 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Hosoda explained how his perceptions of family were changed by marrying after completing The Girl Who Leapt Through Time, clarify?
Clarified sentence. Darth Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 20:35, 10 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Does the similarity between digimon and this movie need to be noted in the development section?
Moved similarity down to reception section. Darth Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 20:35, 10 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Reference 10 did not state the large cast was the direct cause of longer-than-average production time.
Corrected sentence. Darth Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 20:35, 10 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Has the soundtrack received an official English translation? If not, the romaji should come before translations. Use Nihongo3 template.
Changed. Darth Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 20:35, 10 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Source for Kadokawa Shoten heavily promoting the film?
Removed. Darth Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 20:35, 10 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Could the single sentence about the Korean newspaper be merged into a bigger paragraph?
The sentence has been merged. Darth Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 20:35, 10 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

It looks good in general. I could not review the sources that were non-english but presume they were reliable. On hold until the 15th for improvements. DragonZero (Talk · Contribs) 09:44, 10 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I don't see any problems with passing this article. If I have misjudged, someone can send it to GAR. DragonZero (Talk · Contribs) 23:36, 10 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]