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@Gog the Mild: Hello Gog. After a long time. I just completed this draft about a magazine founded by Manilal Dwivedi. Could you please help me with paraphrasing.? Thanks. --Gazal world (talk) 18:49, 9 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Done. Nice work. Obviously, revert anything you don't like. It could do with a slightly longer lead IMO, but I leave that to you. Gog the Mild (talk) 21:19, 9 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Gog the Mild: Thank you very much. --Gazal world (talk) 21:28, 9 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]