Talk:Subway Hero/GA1

"series' co-executive producer Jack Burditt" - producer should be plural? commas needed too
"The credits in the episode also, jokingly, lists the Lord Stanley Cup as a guest star" - lists shouldn't have an s if credits is plural (check this sort of thing throughout)
Is there really no more info on production? Doesn't seem broad...
- Nothing that I can find -- Jamie jca (talk) 18:40, 25 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
"On the newspaper presented on Liz by Jenna" - huh??
"Tim Conway guest starred in this episode as, the 1950s television star, Bucky Bright." - needs copyedit, those commas make it read poorly
"from the program which aired prior to it, My Name Is Earl" - which episode?
IGN shouldn't have italics (in reception section), check all others
- Wikipedia:MOST#Examples -- Jamie jca (talk) 18:40, 25 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  - Wikipedia:ITALICS#Italic_type - it's a website, so doesn't fall under those categories. See also its article. dihydrogen monoxide (H₂O) 09:11, 26 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
    - Removed italics from all non-newspapers/magazines. -- Jamie jca (talk) 18:54, 26 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]