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Reviewer: TonyTheTiger (talk · contribs) 01:31, 1 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

WP:LEAD
Series overview
Cast and characters
What? "However, the only cast member to return from the original series was Richard Armitage in the first episode. " If my english is good, this sentence is not correct. Richard Armitage is not the only member to return, since the two main characters are still the same. Luckyboy1965 (talk) 01:42, 25 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Critical reactions
Episodes
  1. "find the second" - what was the first; demanding->demand
  2. turns out to a woman->turns out to be a woman; was to be planted->were to be planted; is being escorted->is escorted
  3. first sentence quite run-on
  4. O.K.
  5. O.K.
  6. their vehicle breaks down and are forced->their vehicle breaks down, and they are forced
  7. his cousin, Rana from->his cousin, Rana, from
  8. O.K.
  9. O.K.
  10. Section base and they->Section base, and they--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 00:26, 2 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Done fixes on the episodes section. -- Matthew RD 19:19, 2 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]
I am placing this article on hold. The concerns should be relatively easy to address within the next 7 days when I will reassess the article.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 00:29, 2 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Well done. I am Passing this article right now.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 20:26, 2 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]