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Wiki Education assignment: Technology and Culture

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This article is currently the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 19 August 2024 and 7 December 2024. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): DfL13, Abeilke (article contribs). Peer reviewers: Gholzwar06.

— Assignment last updated by Rookieval129 (talk) 18:56, 21 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review Edit

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Hello! I just finished reviewing your article on Statcast, and I appreciate the depth of information provided. However, I believe a few areas could use improvement:

  1. Lead Section: It could be more concise. Consider summarizing the main points and sections more clearly.
  2. Sources: Ensure that all statistics are backed by reliable, up-to-date sources, especially peer-reviewed ones.
  3. Visuals: Adding diagrams or screenshots of Statcast data could enhance understanding.
  4. Content Balance: More information on how Statcast impacts player evaluation and strategy would be beneficial.

Overall, it's a great start! Looking forward to your revisions! Gholzwar06 (talk) 02:07, 21 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]