Talk:St. Xavier's College, Mumbai/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jezhotwells (talk) 18:29, 15 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I shall be reviewing this page against the Good Article criteria, following its nomination for Good Article status.

Overview

The article is not very well written. There are errors of grammar and clumsy phrasing throughout. It would benefit from a thorough copy-edit, maybe with the assistance of the WP:Guild of copyeditors. Until that has happened, I won't go through it in detail.
The article appears thoroughly referenced, but there is an over reliance on primary sources.
The Academics section is rather too detailed, verging on promotional.
Information in many sections is rather unstructured, large numbers of sentences start with the phrase the college...'
The location map of the college should be added to the infobox.
I am putting this on hold for seven days for the copy-editing to be addressed. When that has happened, I will look at it in detail. Jezhotwells (talk) 18:52, 15 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I have received the following note from the nominator on my talk page:

GA nomination of St. Xavier's College, Mumbai

It's impossible to copyedit the article in a week. Please fail the article. Xavier449 (talk) 03:34, 18 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Consequently, I shall fail this article at the present time. Please bring back to WP:GAN when you feel the issues above have been addressed. Or ask me to take a look when you thisnk that it is ready. Jezhotwells (talk) 11:28, 18 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]