Talk:Splash in the Boro

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To the editor who continues to allege that the content of this article is written as an advertisement, I would ask that he or she cite to ANY one sentence within the article that is not a recitation of fact about the park. An article about any amusement-type facility designed to attract tourists may have the tendency to appear as an advertisement; however, the article as currently written is a mere recitation of facts. The facts have all been supported by citations to independent THIRD-PARTY references. There are no citations or language taken from the actual park material whatsoever. More clarity as to the nature of the problem is required. A simple listing in encyclopedia fashion of the attractions contained in the park is a standard procedure for articles about amusement parks. Please see Six Flags over Georgia Disneyland SeaWorld Orlando among many other examples. The editor has twice taken the time to cite the article as appear as an advertisement with little to no direction as to the specific complaints. Therefore, I have removed the tag.