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Notability

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@TylerBurden @MPGuy2824 I'm reading the WP:NALBUMS and this article doesn't seem to meet the criteria in its current form. Would you @TylerBurden be able to update the article and establish the notability? — DaxServer (t · m · c) 10:24, 3 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@DaxServer I'll see about adding some more references covering the album. TylerBurden (talk) 20:31, 9 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Pinging @TylerBurdenDaxServer (t · m · c) 08:36, 23 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@DaxServer If you didn't notice, more sources were added. TylerBurden (talk) 10:47, 23 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

GA review

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The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.


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Nominator: Locust member (talk · contribs) 21:04, 5 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: LastJabberwocky (talk · contribs) 17:45, 21 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hi again :) LastJabberwocky (talk) 17:45, 21 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, thanks for taking another review!!!! Locust member (talk) 14:35, 22 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Seems good, promoting! LastJabberwocky (talk) 16:36, 22 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
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3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
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Composition

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Yannik Gölz from laut.de wrote that "sometimes you have to find the pop elements behind a very unusual façade" I think the sentence feels slightly awkward, because it doesn't mention the album and sounds like Confucius' quote. I think we can cut "sometimes you have to find" and add these two songs the article mentions as examples ("I Am Slowly But Surely Losing Hope" and "Dresden Er").

Just to point out as a possible tweak—both sentences from Pitchfork talk about album's emotions and celestial/otherworldly aesthetics. They can be merged, if it would make a good readable sentence.

Songs

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Both "chiptune" and "16-bit era" seem to provide the same meaning and link to one page.

Critical reception

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it sees Bladee making his lyrics more varied. Can you make it more specific? In what department the album is varied: covers a more varied array of topic or his language is more varied, colorful?

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  • All links are archived, all sources are good per WP:A/C and my experience. checkY
  • While looking through the sources, I couldn't verify this ""Icarus 3reestyle" also received a music video" attached to the 7th source.
  • The article links the song; this is fine per one of the guidelines (I've been searching for it but can't find it) where it states that a youtube link, tweet, post, etc. is usable if included by a secondary source. Locust member (talk) 14:56, 22 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.