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Reviewer: Goodraise 03:07, 28 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

For GA-status:

  • "Speed Grapher was generally seen as an average anime by reviewers." - What is the source of this statement?
  • "Zac found the storyline to be "totally silly" though it was possibly very entertaining." - I don't understand this sentence.
  • "Theron, however, believed the series felt 'more natural'" - What's the point of this "however"?
  • There's a several international publishers and networks that are only in the infobox. They need to be sourced or removed.
  • The prose is fine, though most occurences of the word also are superfluous.

As for the future of this article:

  • The plot summary could use some work as it seems a bit erratic.
  • Some sort of production information would really be nice.
  • Japanese reception and reception from print sources should be added at some point.

Goodraise 03:24, 28 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Mmm, damn that was fast. I've done a few quick tweaks with regards to the GA-status points.
  • The source of the first statement would be the Reception section; it's a bit WP:OR, but I've seen this frequently in video game GAs. Would you prefer it be changed to something less OR-y?
  • The international publishers and networks–should they be mentioned in the "Media" section?
For the "future" points:
  • I'd love for someone else who's watched the series to work on the plot. You know, very well, that I have issues with writing about this one's plot (remember my horrific attempts at the episode list?)
  • Production information generally doesn't exist (though there are some bits about how the English voice actors were chosen in the English release DVDs) so unless I learn to read Japanese and discover information on the Japanese DVD releases (I'm actually hopeful on this one, though it would necessitate purchasing the DVDs...) a Production section is likely not forthcoming.
  • Japanese reception and print sources... hmm, if I ever visit Japan or find someone who is willing to look those up for me...
In any event, I highly doubt this will reach Featured level purely because of it's lack of information. Thanks for the review though! ɳOCTURNEɳOIR talk // contribs 04:13, 28 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I'm passing this article. Please consider reviewing an article yourself. Goodraise 14:33, 29 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]