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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 15:24, 2 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]


I will get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:24, 2 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

  • FYI, there's a later edition of Conway's that consolidates the earlier two volumes that I'd recommend.
    • Updated.
  • Regardless, the Soviet chapter in both editions was written by Norman Friedman and the bibliography should reflect that. Gardiner was the editorial director, not the actual editor.
    • Amended.
  • Add the edition (3rd?) for the Polmar book
    • Added.
  • The main body is in pretty good shape though I have some suggestions for the armament section.
    • Thank you.
  • Fire control for the guns consisted of a MR-143 Lev-214 radar provided by
    • Amended.
  • Describe the ZIF-122 launchers as twin-arm units which ought to allow you to delete the bit about each being capable of launching two missiles
    • Amended.
  • Rework the sonar sentence along the lines of "... including the bow-mounted MG-332T Titan-2T and the towed-array MG-325 Vega that had a range of up to 15 km"
    • Done.
  • Link laser warning system, Netherlands
  • Give the Nato code name for the Project 58
    • Added.
  • Tell the reader which fleet the ship was assigned to
    • This is now in both the lead and main body.
  • ship travel to the NATO member of the Netherlands awkward--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:45, 2 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    • Rephrased.

@Sturmvogel 66: Thank you for the review. If this is fine then I will update the other GA nominations in this class accordingly. simongraham (talk) 00:42, 5 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, please.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:08, 6 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]