Talk:Soviet cruiser Admiral Isachenkov/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 01:15, 19 November 2020 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:15, 19 November 2020 (UTC)

• No DABs, external links working
• Images properly licensed
• When was the sale to Indian scrappers?
  • I don't know, except that it was after 23 September 1992.
• Explain what L/80 means
  • I believe it was the calibre but that is not made clear in the literature.
• What purpose does the MG-35 sonar have?
  • That is not made clear in the reference - maybe it was navigational?
• In the infobox, add the type of radars to their names

 Done

• As a Kresta II-class cruiser, Admiral Isachenkov

 Done

• Be consistent about using a colon after NATO reporting name

 Done

• Link steam turbine, surface-to-air missile, Captain 2nd rank, sister ship, Libya

 Done

• Spell out DP on first use in the main body and link

 Done

• What do you mean by dual-role torpedoes?

 Done Both anti-ship and anti-submarine - I have clarified in the text. and the two Volga "the"? two of each type?  Done Ambiguity removed

• a hyphen on "hull mounted", "fire control", "direction finding", satellite navigation, satellite communication and "radar jamming"

 Done Although satellite communication and navigation are conventionally not hyphenated so I have left these stet.

• Sonars don't go in a radardome

 Done Should be radome

• serial number 727 yard number

 Done

• for Soviet deputy "the" and what was his full title? Deputy commissar?

 Done I don't know, so I have changed that.

• Explain that Kiev was an aircraft carrier before giving her name. Always explain what type a ship is when introducing it

 Done

• the Soviet vessels, such as HMS Ardent, Move the British ship name in front of "the Soviet vessels

 Done

• undertaking repairs and being upgraded with URPK-5 Rastrub (SS-N-14B) which added anti-ship capability. Put in past tense and rephrase

 Done

• On the return to service, awkward

 Done

• rather than having great expense spent on upgrades and repairs, on 3 July 1992 was decommissioned Rephrase and put in past tense

 Done

• Indian company to the broken up "be"

 Done

• Is there an ISSN, OCLC, or ISBN for Berezhnoy? and put the translated title in title case --Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 22:20, 30 November 2020 (UTC)

 Done

• Thank you for a very thorough review. simongraham (talk) 19:29, 1 December 2020 (UTC)

• A few small things remain.
• Hyphenate dual purpose gun
• Translated titles use title case
• The navy cost of upgrades
• Politician should be replaced with "official" as most admirals aren't officially politicians--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 12:35, 9 December 2020 (UTC)

• @Sturmvogel 66: Great spots! These are now done. simongraham (talk) 08:08, 10 December 2020 (UTC)