Talk:Sonya Levien

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Peer Review 2

Wow incredible work! This article is extremely informative and in depth, and remains unbiased throughout - well done. Something I might suggest is that you do not have enough hyperlinks within Wikipedia, meaning some of the words you use and reference could be linked to another Wikipedia for better clarity and understanding. You have to assume that anyone might read this, and might not know (far fetched but possible) what Hollywood is, or what an Academy Award is. Some of the words I noticed were the two I just mentioned, religions and origins like Jewish and Russian etc (you can connect these to 'Russia' or 'Jewish Culture' or whatever comes up). I recommend reading through your piece again and looking for these kinds of words or places that might seem self-explanatory, but that definitely have Wikipedia pages already written about them. Secondly, I agree with the peer edit below me suggesting the wording of 'career and later life' is a bit awkward, though this might be standard for Wikipedia -I'm not really sure. I also think that perhaps 'personal life' should appear before 'career and later life' on the page, as a jump from 'early life' to 'later life' seems like a bit too large a gap.

Other than these comments this is extremely well done!! Great references and really effective flow. Ndoyle88 March 13th 2016. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ndoyle88 (talk • contribs) 19:17, 13 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review

This is a really great article! You have done an impressive amount of research into Sonya Levien's life, it shows especially with your knowledge of her Early Life and Personal Life sections. I especially like your addition of her political views. As well, you have lots of references, all of which look cited properly. I only have two suggestions to help improve what you have thus far. One is that the first sentence after 'Career and Later Life' could be reworded. The second is that when you mention Levien was the 'highest paid screenwriter', you should try to elaborate more on the context of this statement. I think these changes will help with the overall wording of your Wikipedia article. I also added in a few minor copyedit changes but overall, great job!Musiclove44 (talk) 05:23, 1 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]