Talk:Sonne der Gerechtigkeit

Sonne der Gerechtigkeit has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: December 28, 2017. (Reviewed version).

This article was created or improved during WikiProject Europe's "European 10,000 Challenge", which started on November 1, 2016, and is ongoing. You can help out!

A fact from Sonne der Gerechtigkeit appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 8 November 2017 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that facing the rise of Nazi ideology, Otto Riethmüller compiled the song "Sonne der Gerechtigkeit" for young people from hymns by three authors of two earlier centuries?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2017/November. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Sonne der Gerechtigkeit.

Wikipedia

Christian music Low‑importance

	This article is within the scope of WikiProject Christian music, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of Christian music on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks.Christian musicWikipedia:WikiProject Christian musicTemplate:WikiProject Christian musicChristian music
Low	This article has been rated as Low-importance on the project's importance scale.

Classical music

This article is within the scope of WikiProject Classical music, which aims to improve, expand, copy edit, and maintain all articles related to classical music, that are not covered by other classical music related projects. Please read the guidelines for writing and maintaining articles. To participate, you can edit this article or visit the project page for more details.Classical musicWikipedia:WikiProject Classical musicTemplate:WikiProject Classical musicClassical music

Songs

This article is within the scope of WikiProject Songs, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of songs on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks.SongsWikipedia:WikiProject SongsTemplate:WikiProject Songssong

Christianity Low‑importance

	Christianity portal This article is within the scope of WikiProject Christianity, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of Christianity on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks.ChristianityWikipedia:WikiProject ChristianityTemplate:WikiProject ChristianityChristianity
Low	This article has been rated as Low-importance on the project's importance scale.

Germany Low‑importance

	Germany portal This article is within the scope of WikiProject Germany, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of Germany on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks.GermanyWikipedia:WikiProject GermanyTemplate:WikiProject GermanyGermany
Low	This article has been rated as Low-importance on the project's importance scale.

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Sonne der Gerechtigkeit/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 19:24, 27 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I'll check this over soon. JAGUAR 19:24, 27 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

"His focus is to unity among separated Christians" - missing word here. promote unity perhaps?

taken --GA

"He was impressed by the pietist movement and converted in 1714" - converted to what?

Converted from Catholic (mentioned before) to Protestant, - well, pietism is widely known as a Protestant movement. How would word it, not boring readers who know that? --GA

"and also faith, hope and ardent love, the theological virtues." - a semicolon or hyphen would be better suited here

I thought semicolon is only for full sentences, no? Learning. Trying the other way round. --GA

"The alternative "ecumenical" final stanza (7a) is focused on unity, compared to the unity of Jesus and God" - compared to what originally? Is this referring to unity among Germans?

In the song, it's open and general. "Lass uns eins sein" simply means "Let us be one", followed by "wie du mit dem Vater bist" (as You are with the Father). When sung in the peace prayers, the unity between Germans in East and West was often meant.

No dead links

@Gerda Arendt: good work with this one! Just some minor nitpicking here. Once they're all clarified I'll promote this. JAGUAR 19:48, 28 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I tried, just would need help for one wording. Thank you. - Did you know that I ran a peer review for another cantata, but there was so much conflict that I never made the GA nom. Would you dare something complex, by several authors with different ideas? Ein feste Burg. --GA

If you nominate that article I'll be happy to review it. Regarding this review, I'm fine with keeping the "pietism" wording; I was already aware of this term and can understand what it's trying to convey. As for the rest, I think this article is in excellent shape overall and definitely worthy of the GA icon, so I'll be promoting. Well done!

JAGUAR 22:46, 28 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]