Talk:Songs of Faith and Devotion/GA1
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Reviewer: Casliber (talk · contribs) 10:03, 1 July 2015 (UTC)
Will take a look at this Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 10:03, 1 July 2015 (UTC)
- Article needs some discussion of the tracks and their writing.
- One new approach to recording was performance. - sentence is meaningless - remove and let facts speak for themselves
- though the album used a great deal of live recorded audio than previous Depeche Mode releases - which album we talking about? Also, "than" needs a comparative adjective
- link "distortion"
- link "outro"
- Upon returning, they found it difficult to re-integrate as a unit, - ummm, how about "difficult to work/collaborate together...?
- The concept of the band living and working together in the same house meant that they rarely got breaks from each other - wasn't a concept it was reality. I'd say "Living and working together in the same house meant that the band members rarely got breaks from each other"
- The band also began to jam together, something which they had not previously done, only for fun. - huh? either they hadn't or they had..only for fun?
- The lack of success of coming up with musical ideas from such jams led to frustration that the band were not making any progress - remove everything after "frustration"
- The lack of progress increasingly frustrated recording. --> "The lack of progress increasingly frustrated everyone/the band."
1. Well written?:
- Prose quality:
- tweaks pending as above
- Manual of Style compliance:
2. Factually accurate and verifiable?:
- References to sources:
- need to look at these
- Citations to reliable sources, where required:
- No original research:
3. Broad in coverage?:
- Major aspects:
- as it stands, lacks any discussion on the songs themselves. Needs a summary at least.
- Focused:
4. Reflects a neutral point of view?:
- Fair representation without bias:
5. Reasonably stable?
- No edit wars, etc. (Vandalism does not count against GA):
6. Illustrated by images, when possible and appropriate?:
- Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- single fair use image.
Overall: on hold. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 22:11, 1 July 2015 (UTC)
Ok, I am failing this as no action taken for a month. It doesn't need that much but is lacking in some material. Hopefully this review will be helpful for a future reader. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 21:34, 31 July 2015 (UTC)
- All adjustments made that have been suggested. The only thing missing is a song summary, largely because information on all tracks individually is surprisingly difficult to come by. (82.27.188.98 (talk) 20:58, 23 October 2015 (UTC))