Talk:Songbird Sings the Classics/GA1
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 19:25, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a. (reference section):
- b. (citations to reliable sources):
- c. (OR):
- d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a. (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a. (major aspects):
- b. (focused):
- a. (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
- b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/fail:
- Pass/fail:
(Criteria marked are unassessed)
This should be a nice, smooth review! --K. Peake 19:25, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
[edit]- Infobox looks good!
- Add a comma after Regine Velasquez in the first sentence
- Done
- "as its sponsor." → "as the sponsor."
- Done
- Pipe 1960s to 1960s in music
- Done
- Pipe 1970s to 1970s in music
- Done
- Remove the introduction to Gerard Salonga per it being done in the body
- Removed and tweaked
- "the intimate show and Velasquez's and" → "the intimate show, and Velasquez's and"
- Done
Thanks for the initial comments. Actioned per responses above. Pseud 14 (talk) 20:52, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
- Pseud 14 I meant pipe to the plural for the 1960s and 1970s music articles; do this in the body too, please. --K. Peake 08:32, 9 August 2023 (UTC)
- I see what you mean. Done (I think) Pseud 14 (talk) 13:08, 9 August 2023 (UTC)
Background and development
[edit]- "It marked her first collaboration" → "It marked Velasquez's first collaboration"
- "with his sister Lea Salonga." → "with his sister Lea." per MOS:SAMESURNAME
- Done above
Synopsis and reception
[edit]- "into a Henry Mancini tribute number," → "into a Mancini tribute number,"
- "The next number saw her perform" → "The next number saw Velasquez perform"
- "she stood next to" → "Velasquez stood next to"
- "He highlighted how" → "Cruz highlighted how"
- Done above
Broadcast and recordings
[edit]- Use the full name of RPN
- Wikilink live album
- Mention that the certification was in the Philippines and how many units it represents
- I added the number of units sold and included a source for shipments of albums required to achieve platinum status. Same source can be found in her discography. As for adding Philippines, the certifying body (PARI) already mentions that, so I think it would be redundant to add it again.
Set list
[edit]- Good
See also
[edit]- Good
References
[edit]- Copyvio score looks definitely great at 20.0%!!!
- Add via Google Books with the wikilink for refs 1, 4, 5 and 6
- Added
External links
[edit]- Good
Final comments and verdict
[edit]On hold until all of the issues are fixed; shouldn't take long at all especially with your speed! --K. Peake 08:32, 9 August 2023 (UTC)
- Thanks for taking up this review K. Peake. I have addressed your comments and provided my responses above. Let me know if I missed anything. Pseud 14 (talk) 13:08, 9 August 2023 (UTC)
- ✓ Pass now, great job on this! --K. Peake 20:17, 9 August 2023 (UTC)
- Thanks for taking up this review K. Peake. I have addressed your comments and provided my responses above. Let me know if I missed anything. Pseud 14 (talk) 13:08, 9 August 2023 (UTC)