Talk:Solo diving/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hawkeye7 (talk · contribs) 19:24, 12 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

A large proportion of this article is unreferenced, and therefore will not pass GA review. If you believe that you can add the required inline citations, comment below. Otherwise I will fail the review. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 19:24, 12 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hawkeye7, you catch me at a time when I am overextended in both real life and wikiwork. I doubt that I will have time to source much over the next week, even month. If you could specify by tagging the outstanding items which you feel are in need of references it will help. If you just require all paragraphs to end with a reference, please say so. If you have any other constructive suggestions they will be welcome. Cheers, · · · Peter (Southwood) ^(talk): 05:44, 13 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I require all the paragraphs to end with a reference. I'll add a short list of other suggestions tomorrow. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 08:33, 13 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

The lead is supposed to be a summary of the article. In some contexts, it is separated from the article. But the lead here is more of an introduction.
Suggest linking to the articles on snorkeling, cave diving and rebreather diving

Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:34, 13 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I am going to archive the nomination, since I was trying to reduce the size of the GA queue. But make the required changes in your own time, and re-nominate. Then ping me and I will review so it doesn't have to wait for months. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:40, 13 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the recommendations. Cheers, · · · Peter (Southwood) ^(talk): 06:30, 14 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]