Talk:Soft Light (The X-Files)/GA1

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 02:03, 23 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Match with other X-Files article by linking season 2, then removed the other lists at the very bottom of the infobox
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 21:07, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Episode can't really "premiered" how about "originally aired"
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 21:07, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
The episode received mostly positive reviews from television critics. → The episode generally received positive reviews from television critics.
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 21:07, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"like". Isn't really a word you want here. How about "such as"
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 21:07, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

"huge" is not needed; same for "even" kind of WP:NPOV
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 21:07, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Who was it directing by ;( James A. Contner is very sad right now. Lol
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 21:07, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

"Soft Light" was first broadcast in the United States on May 5, 1995, on the Fox Broadcasting Company → "Soft Light" originally aired on the Fox network on May 5, 1995.
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 21:07, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
UK airing, perhaps?
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 21:07, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Ref. 6: "Sci-Fi Blast From The Past - Tony Shalhoub (The X-Files)" The - should be an en dash as per WP:DASH.
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:58, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Ref. 6: How is that a good source
Firstly, it's a primary source-based interview, so its notable. Secondly, the author is a regular contributor to Andrew Morton's website/newspaper, The Morton Report, so he isn't just a random crackpot Link--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:58, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"Fox Broadcasting Company", not "corporation"
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 21:07, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Ref. 9: Doubled periods with Time, Inc., which should be Time, Inc
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 21:07, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

on TheXFiles.com should use "at"
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 21:07, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"The X-Files Wiki, an external wiki". Repetitive. How about: "The X-Files, an external wiki"
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 21:07, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

There, I believe I've gotten everything. Thank you for the review.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 21:59, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Will pass the artcle. Congrats! TBran dl ey 23:14, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]