Talk:So Seductive
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Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk · contribs) 05:18, 22 June 2012 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
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- It is broad in its coverage.
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- It is stable.
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- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
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Infobox
[edit]- No issues
Lead
[edit]"So Seductive" is a song by American rapper Tony Yayo... → Make the sentence end there to comply with WP:BEGINNINGDone I Am Rufus • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 08:20, 22 June 2012 (UTC)...reaching number 48 on the US Billboard Hot 100:... → Add semi-colon at the end of thisDone I Am Rufus • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 08:20, 22 June 2012 (UTC)
Background
[edit]...of 50 Cent's album Get Rich or Die Tryin'... → Add year of release for "Get Rich or Die Tryin'"Done I Am Rufus • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 08:20, 22 June 2012 (UTC)The group also released their debut album, Beg for Mercy... → Add year of release for "Beg for Mercy"Done I Am Rufus • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 08:20, 22 June 2012 (UTC)...which involved wearing "Free Yayo" shirts advertising his situation... → Add semi-colon at the end of thisDone I Am Rufus • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 08:20, 22 June 2012 (UTC)...after receiving a call from the Shady Records offices advising him to do so:[4] → At semi-colon at endDone I Am Rufus • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 08:20, 22 June 2012 (UTC)...titled Thoughts of a Predicate Felon, almost immediately after leaving prison... → Put year of release for album in parenthesesDone I Am Rufus • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 08:20, 22 June 2012 (UTC)
Writing and composition
[edit]According to WP:SAMPLE, an audio recording has to be less than 10% of the original recording (it needs to be less than 21 seconds and is currently 23 seconds)Done (shortened to 19 seconds) I Am Rufus • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 15:30, 22 June 2012 (UTC)
Critical reception
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Music video
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Live performances
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Awards and nominations
[edit]Get rid of this section, but put information in prose form in "Critical reception" sectionDone I Am Rufus • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 08:20, 22 June 2012 (UTC)
Track listing
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Credits and personnel
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Charts
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Radio and release history
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References
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After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put the article on hold at this time. There are some minor prose issues among others that are keeping this article from reaching good article status. I will give you the general seven days to fix these mistakes and/or address issues which you believe do not concern good article status, until a consensus is reached. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask. Rp0211 (talk2me) 06:14, 22 June 2012 (UTC)
- Since all of the issues have been addressed, I feel comfortable passing this article. Congratulations and keep up the good work! Rp0211 (talk2me) 17:45, 22 June 2012 (UTC)