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Nominator: Seefooddiet (talk · contribs) 07:03, 14 September 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Kimikel (talk · contribs) 18:03, 5 January 2025 (UTC)
Hello, I will be reviewing this article as part of the January GAN drive. Please expect comments from me within the next few days. Kimikel (talk) 18:03, 5 January 2025 (UTC)
- @Seefooddiet: This is an interesting historical topic that I had not known anything about previously. I have left my comments below; please let me know if you have any questions or concerns regarding my suggestions. Thank you. Kimikel (talk) 15:29, 6 January 2025 (UTC)
Well-written
[edit]Lead
[edit]- I would merge paragraphs 1 and 2 as well as 3 and 4 to avoid having one-sentence paragraphs in the lead.
- However, these efforts were suppressed > remove However
Background
[edit]- doubled by 1891 to 840. > doubled to 840 by 1891.
- , 2 km (1.2 mi) away from Kaech'ŏk-ri, > remove commas
History
[edit]- However, the community > The community
- in the Russian style. However, they > in the Russian style, though they
- And while not directly > remove "And"
- A community organization... > merge sentence with previous paragraph
- However, the group secretly funded > Secretly, the group funded
- However, Russian authorities, under Japanese pressure, > Under Japanese pressure, Russian authorities
- in Ussuriysk, a protest > remove comma
- local Japanese consulate, local government buildings, and local consulates > the first "local" is the only one that's needed
- late 1922, after the Japanese > remove comma
- would attend the event > attended the event
- However, militant Korean independence > Militant Korean independence
Other memorials
[edit]- These paragraphs could all be merged into one since they're relatively short
- Korean Cultural Center, Ussuriysk > Ussuriysk Korean Cultural Center
- restored in 2017, amidst > remove comma
- At the northern end of the nearby Amur Street is a house with a unique street address "Seoul Street" > A house at the northern end of the nearby Amur Street has the unique street address "Seoul Street"
- , that dates from the > , which dates from the
Notes
[edit]- Akulenko claims > Akulenko writes (IAW MOS:CLAIM)
Verifiable
[edit]- The first two Korean sources' titles, as well source 20, have not been translated into English.
- Some of the authors' names have been transliterated; some have not. Since this is an article intended for English-language readers, I would lean towards having them all transliterated. Same with some of the website names, if possible.
- 20 and 29 aren't marked as being in Korean.
Spot check
[edit]Illustrated
[edit]- All images are properly licensed and beneficial to the article.
Neutrality, broadness, and stability
[edit]- No issues