Talk:Significant Other (album)/GA1

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Reviewer: What a pro. (talk · contribs) 02:32, 25 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

The album sees the band... --> The album saw the band...
The second paragraph is one sentence long. Cut it off after "Limp Bizkit", remove the bands the collaborators are from, and combine the sentences with the first paragraph.
...in which violence erupted... --> ...where violence erupted

No need for the border around the music sample.
Hip-hop origins? Was Limp Bizkit originally hip-hop?
Unlink Method Man.
...also recorded with Eminem Recorded what?
Unlink Jonathan Davis, Scott Weiland, and Aaron Lewis.
...and Durst's mother appeared in an interlude. Put in a separate sentence.
Again, no need for the border around the music sample.
In the sample caption, remove "from their second album Significant Other, which is excerpted here."
The last paragraph's sentences don't really have much connection with each other. Consider rewriting them.
Claypool states... --> Claypool stated...

Remove the info about the music videos, put it in the lead, or combine it with the prior section. It doesn't belong in a "reception" section.
Unlink Family Values Tour and Woodstock 1999.
No info about the total sales of the album?
Why is the controversy section in the release section?
...awarded the album three and a half out of five stars. Did they say anything about the album?
Again, what did Martin Charles Strong say about the album?

- Rolling Stone and Strong's book talk about the band in a biographical sense, not in relation to their albums. --WTF (talk) 13:50, 27 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  - Ah, okay. What a pro (talk, contribs) is on fire. 09:04, 28 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

All good.

Cite all of the chart positions.
Add chart positions for the album worldwide.
Was the album certified gold anywhere? If so, add it here.
You focus too much on the Billboard charts here. Add more worldwide charts, drop some of the Billboard ones.

The Allmusic link is a bare URL. Cite it properly using the Allmusic template.
Reviewed by David Browne (1999-06-18). "Significant Other Review | Music Reviews and News". EW.com. Retrieved 2012-02-13. --> David Browne (1999-06-18). "Significant Other Review". Entertainment Weekly. Retrieved 2012-02-13.
"The History of Rock Music. Limp Bizkit: biography, discography, reviews, links". Scaruffi.com. Retrieved 2012-02-13. --> Piero Scaruffi. "The History of Rock Music. Limp Bizkit: biography, discography, reviews, links". Scaruffi.com. Retrieved 2012-02-13.
Robert Christgau review citation is a bare URL. Fix this.
"Police Investigate Reports of Rapes at Woodstock". Washingtonpost.com. July 29, 1999. Retrieved July 21, 2011. --> "Police Investigate Reports of Rapes at Woodstock". The Washington Post. 1999-7-29. Retrieved 2011-7-21.

If these problems are addressed in 10 days, I will pass the article. All concerns have been addressed. I am passing the article. What a pro (talk, contribs) is on fire. 11:04, 28 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]