Jump to content

Talk:Siege of Fort William Henry/GA1

Page contents not supported in other languages.
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

GA Review

[edit]

Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch

Reviewer: JonCatalán(Talk) 22:46, 7 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

This is generally a very good article, and probably worthy of an A-class review. I really only have one comment:

  • You first write, "They took with them about 200 captives that Montcalm was powerless to recover." A paragraph later, you claim that, "[h]e managed to secure the release of about 500 captive..." I figure that some of those captives were unrelated to the siege of Fort William Henry. Maybe this should be made clear.

Otherwise, the article meets the GA-criteria. JonCatalán(Talk) 23:13, 7 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]