Talk:Sid Justin/GA1
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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 20:12, 24 October 2023 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
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Notes
[edit]- Added cats Junior college football players and coaches in the United States, Otis College of Art and Design alumni, New Orleans football, African-Americans
- "in 1973, after his graduation from Crenshaw" remove comma
- Removed.
- "Crenshaw, and was" remove comma
- Done.
- "named All-Pacific Coast Athletic Association" do you know if first or second team? add to infobox
- Can't seem to find if it was first / second team - just added to the infobox without the -team selection.
- "on August 14, 1980, and" that source says its yesterdays transactions so 13th
- Fixed.
- "He was waived by Tampa Bay on August 26" same for this
- Fixed.
- "signed with the Winnipeg Blue Bombers of the Canadian Football League (CFL) on September 8" not sure when but probably not the same day the source was published
- Sounds like it was around September 6, so I added "c. September 6"
- "signed with the Buffalo Bills in April 1981" PFA has Feb.
- Changed.
- "placed on injured reserve on August 18" that's probably not Aug 18 either but i dont know
- Changed to 17 as that seems to have been when it occurred.
- add that he was released by the Bills on 8/31/1981 per PFA
- Done.
- no date spans for coaching career? I'm not asking you to include that if you dont want because that gets confusing sometimes.
- The source didn't really give exact dates.
- "charts in Asia for five months" ref 25 says 6 months
- Do you think we should go with Justin's website, that of The Miracles, or add a note?
- Just pick one then add a note for the discrepancy. Also just for my purposes, I am noting that this is the last thing that needs done. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 20:34, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
- @WikiOriginal-9: Note added. BeanieFan11 (talk) 20:39, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
- Just pick one then add a note for the discrepancy. Also just for my purposes, I am noting that this is the last thing that needs done. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 20:34, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
- Do you think we should go with Justin's website, that of The Miracles, or add a note?
That's all I think. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 20:40, 24 October 2023 (UTC)
All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 20:40, 27 October 2023 (UTC)