Talk:Short-tail stingray/GA1
GA Review[edit]
Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch
Reviewer: Sasata (talk) 19:05, 16 September 2010 (UTC)
Hi Yzx, article looks very solid, like usual. A few comments:
- Schreiners ray or Schreiner's ray?
- Fishbase says "Schreiners"; my feeling is that it's probably meant to be "Scheriner's", but go figure.
- "The modestly-sized mouth" doesn't give me much of a size reference… can I stick my hand in it?
- Modestly-sized relative to the body, which is vague yes but I think adequate to convey "not very small and not very large" ...and yes, probably.
- are kevlar bootees equipment worn by divers? Might be worthwhile to mention that it's so.
- Yes; I've piped the link to the appropriate article.
- there's no mention of the synonym Trygon schreineri Gilchrist in the text
- My policy on synonyms is to only mention them in prose if they're especially significant in some way. Otherwise I think the synonyms section of the taxobox serves in providing them.
Let me know of further issues. -- Yzx (talk) 19:36, 16 September 2010 (UTC)
- No issues, article meets GA criteria, passing now. Sasata (talk) 19:54, 16 September 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks! -- Yzx (talk) 19:59, 16 September 2010 (UTC)