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Sentimiento (album) was a Music good articles nominee, but did not meet the good article criteria at the time. There may be suggestions below for improving the article. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.

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Date	Process	Result
July 23, 2012	Peer review	Reviewed
January 18, 2014	Good article nominee	Not listed
December 3, 2015	Good article nominee	Not listed

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Merger proposal

Why should the platinum version have its own version?? that's unique Do U(knome)? ^yes...|_{or no} · 00:45, 16 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Agreed. PhilKnight (talk) 12:37, 16 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

A couple things missing

Could be a C easily, but lacks personnel and reception section. Zidane tribal (talk) 00:44, 30 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

As per this message I will give some comments for improvements.

You may want you get the article through WP:PR where experienced FA editors can addressed further comments
Also nominating it at WP:GOCE/REQ will do the article some good
The infobox "length" section needs a {{duration}} template
Link reggaeton in the lead
"The album was composed by Ivy" ---> her last name, or in this case, Queen would need to replace "Ivy" per WP:BIO
"alongside various writers, artists, and producers." ---> their names would need to be addressed here. Take a look at Mariah Carey (album) and Selena Live! for examples
"It featured a collaboration with Don Omar as well as other songs that did not include Ivy Queen on them." ----> needs to be explained further, what do you mean by "other songs"? Why was she not included in songs that are in her album?
"It marks the first time Ivy Queen cracked the Billboard Top 200," ----> Not a good entrance, furthermore we need the positions.
"entering the Top Latin Album chart at number 4" ---> number 4 needs to be written out as such "number four" per WP:ORDINAL
"making it her highest peaking position yet by any of her albums." ---> As of 2012, Sentimiento remained her highest-ranking album on the Top Latin Albums chart. I believe that's what you are trying to say?
"Its also her fastest selling album, " ---> you mean Becoming her fastest-selling album, Sentimiento received a platinum certification from the Recording Industry Association of America (RIAA), denoting shipments of 100,000 copies in the United States. also link Recording Industry Association of America and platinum.
There are too many instances with "the album" try to switch it up (e.g., the recording, Sentimineto, it, etc.)
"The album spawned three singles the lead, "Que Lloren" became a Top 10 hit on the Hot Latin Tracks chart; and the second being "En Que Fallamos"." ----> Sentimineto produced three single, leading single "Que Lloren", "En Que Fallamos", and the title track, the latter reached the top 10 on the US Hot Latin Tracks chart. The title track peaked at number 44 on the Dance/Club Play Songs chart. Also did "En Que Fallamos" shared a position? Also link Dance/Club Play Songs
"It marks the second and last studio album released under Univision before switching to Machete Music in 2010 to release her seventh studio album." ----> The recording marked the last studio album by Queen to be released under Univision, before switching to Machete Music in 2010. pay no mind to what I've unlink, like all terms as you have them on the article
No need for bolded texts in the "background" section
There are some sentences such as this one "Sentimiento is the sixth studio album by Ivy Queen. It marks the second and last album under the label Univision." that resembles the lead which is a big no no ;)
The "composition" and "critical reception" sections lacks any wikilinks, needs cleanup
Charts needs to be in compliance with WP:ACCESSIBILITY
FN#1 do not italicize the title as its not a printed source
FN#3, FN#5 as per above, and link Allmusic and the publisher is Rovi Corporation
FN#4 link Billboard and the publisher is Prometheus Global Media
FN#6 as per FN#3 and FN#1, and link About.com.
Once you have finished this, you can ping me on my talk page and I'll revisit. Best, Jona yo! ^{Selena 4 ever} 15:44, 12 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Unclear phrase

In my opinion this phrase from the lead needs clarifying and possible rewording as well as remove the first person reference:

"She explained that each guest artist is on the album for a purpose, to tell the listeners that we have all loved at least once in our lives."EagerToddler39 (talk) 00:27, 21 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]