Talk:Secret Life (album)
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Musical Style Difference
[edit]how would you write about the style of this album vs his previous work without it sounding like promotional content Pikachufan999 (talk) 15:35, 12 May 2023 (UTC)
- Hi Pikachufan999, welcome to Wikipedia. Everything here needs to be written in an encyclopaedic tone. This means personal opinions and original research need to be avoided, so you will need to find a reference for the claims you want to add. Then, you need to be neutral in the way it's written. "Secret Life showcases the unique talents and styles of the two artists, creating a beautiful and mesmerizing project that stands out in its genre" is not neutral. Take a look at the links I've provided earlier, as well as WP:WBA. If you'd like to explore it further, WP:NUTART has a long list of community essays that might help you understand the way Wikipedia articles are written. Anarchyte (talk) 04:28, 14 May 2023 (UTC)
Neutral Point of View For "Critical reception" Section
[edit]Hello!
I read through the critical reception section, and while I think it had a lot of effort put into it, it's written so that it seems like the critics praised the album more then they criticized it, which isn't the case. Now, don't get me wrong; I absolutely love Secret Life, but WP:NPOV must be enforced, no matter how much it breaks my heart. If you disagree with my assessment, I'd love to talk before making any significant changes.
Sincerely, CrowEater (talk) 05:59, 25 November 2023 (UTC)