Talk:Scary Godmother: Halloween Spooktakular/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:27, 27 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments later in the week. Some Dude From North Carolina^{wanna talk?} 23:27, 27 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Using Amazon as a reference doesn't seem like a good choice per WP:AMAZON. I suggest replacing it with this.
- Done HumanxAnthro (talk) 03:19, 28 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
As the two references after "first book" are already in #Background_and_development, they're not necessary for the lead.
- Done HumanxAnthro (talk) 22:56, 28 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Everything else looks good.

"Katie, Bert and Daryl" → "Katie, Bert, and Daryl"
"Bert, Daryl and Katie" → "Bert, Daryl, and Katie"
"He declares himself the "leader" out of nowhere by winning a rock, paper, scissors game." → "He declares himself the "leader" after winning a rock, paper, scissors game."
- All of the following above done HumanxAnthro (talk) 22:58, 28 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

"US$350,000" → "$350,000"
"vice president Kim Dent Wilder" → "Mainframe vice president Kim Dent Wilder"
"a TV series" → "a television series"
- All above done HumanxAnthro (talk) 03:07, 29 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

In the last paragraph of this section, remove the last part of the quote "and generally bugged everyone several times a week with my yammering phone calls" as it seems unnecessary, and add an [and] in-between "designed sets, painted backgrounds".
- Done HumanxAnthro (talk) 03:08, 29 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

This reference in the article says the film went to Region 1 DVD on September 3, not September 8. Also, change this in the lead.
"Germany and Italy" → "Germany, and Italy"
- All above done HumanxAnthro (talk) 03:10, 29 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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@HumanxAnthro: I just finished adding most, if not all of the rest of my notes. The article is well-written but has a few issues to address. Leave comments and ping me back, and I hope I can promote this article to GA-status soon. Some Dude From North Carolina^{wanna talk?} 01:06, 29 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @Some Dude From North Carolina: All completed HumanxAnthro (talk) 03:12, 29 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]